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Let me dream

Outside it rains,
And I am here in this loneliness.
Yes, I like to be alone,
Just thinking of your smile.
Nobody can come here to bother me.
It’s just you in my mind.
Let me dream,
It feels so good.
Reality is too sad,
Let me swim in my thoughts…

How it hurts me to know,
My dear,
That I can’t always see your eyes.
It’s hard to understand,
But after all these years,
I still love you…
I feel you…

I hear in my mind
Your warm voice…
I dream with your face,
You’re so beautiful.

And I can’t resist,
Even if you’re gone.
I keep dreaming of you.
When you whisper in my ear,
I can see stars.

I know, I know.
You don’t want me to be yours
But I still hope that I’ll get your heart.

You will be my love.
I love you honestly!
I want you close.
I want your kiss.
I’m waiting here, in the dark,
I’m still hoping to get the kiss I always deserved.

But, while it’s not true…
Let me dream…
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:iconwonkawolf:
I feel this way sometimes......


..You are a REALLY, REALLY good writer....

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I eat danger for breakfast!!!!!

Joe Jonas in high heels.

~Love is real and Love is God.~
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Aw... :hug: thank you so much!!

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The biggest The Great Mouse Detective fan you will ever know. :heart:

"Goodbye, Johanna! You're gone and yet you're mine... I'm fine, Johanna! I'm fine..." Sweeney Todd :star:

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You're welcome :hug:

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I eat danger for breakfast!!!!!

Joe Jonas in high heels.

~Love is real and Love is God.~
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this is really good!
i especially like this first paragraph
:)
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Thank you! Glad you liked it! :D

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The biggest The Great Mouse Detective fan you will ever know. :heart:

"Goodbye, Johanna! You're gone and yet you're mine... I'm fine, Johanna! I'm fine..." Sweeney Todd :star:

Sir Cardi :heart: CardiLady
:iconsephiroththepure:
Love it! So much emotion. A wonderful piece. Sorry it's taken me so long to get to it.

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Why the Mythbusters try to keep Jamie happy.

:heart: So much love for my Aimi. :heart:
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it!!

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The biggest The Great Mouse Detective fan you will ever know. :heart:

"Goodbye, Johanna! You're gone and yet you're mine... I'm fine, Johanna! I'm fine..." Sweeney Todd :star:

Sir Cardi :heart: CardiLady
:iconsephiroththepure:
I decided to switch up my deviation listings - sort them oldest to newest, and then sort them by author (cause there's a couple authors I'm just deleting everything from - mostly club submissions that I never look at).

so eventually I'll be getting back up to the new stuff. Spent a whole day on dA and went from almost 9k deviations to just under 7k. I'm at 6.5 right now. :XD:

I'm workin' on it, though.

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Why the Mythbusters try to keep Jamie happy.

:heart: So much love for my Aimi. :heart:

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